Sunday, July 31, 2011

Love lasts forevermore.






He staggered and walked

She took long strides, huddled against each other
They fall to the rough ground
Vultures feed on the flesh
They remained so-
Now and forever

Also posted under Sunday 160

Much Love,

Sonshu

20 comments:

  1. What, no rescue team? Shame! :)

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  2. whew...leaves me wondering what he did to deserve such a fate

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  3. Ooooh...dark. Very dark. But slightly romantic in a macabre way!

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  4. " Ooooh...dark. Very dark. But slightly romantic in a macabre way! "

    ^ Second that :)

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  5. @Jinksy: Well, the rescue team probably stopped outside looking at the scene. HAHA.

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  6. @Brian: Thats left to your imaginations (:

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  7. 5thsister: Well well, maybe its dark romance :) HAHAHA

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  8. @Ni: THANKYOU.

    ahaha. yes. yes.

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  9. Oooo yes, darkly romantic, I like that. Thank you so much for playing along with the Sunday 160.

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  10. Loved your offbeat 160 Sonshu...

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  11. Dark, yes but still i can feel a hidden beauty in there....

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  12. @MM: Thankyou. (: its my pleasure.

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  13. @Aspirant: THANKS FOR your gracious praises! :)

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  14. @Arti: Yes, everyones been saying its dark! :)

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  15. :( That's sad...
    I don't like sad.
    But love the way you wrote it <3

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  16. ... T_____T
    The poem is really short but right to the point. Yes, it is dark and sad, but I like it. I don't know how to describe it, but it leaves me kind of wordless. I guess the poem tells the truth that not all relationship have a happy ending after all.

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  17. interesting....very interesting...eternity is but the beginning of something ;)

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