Wednesday, November 10, 2010

AO: Staying Alive

Prompt 10


Sometimes life becomes tough
That living through becomes
A very difficult matter
Yet we cannot surrender
In every waking day
Now, we should smile
Glum just spoils everything


As the days overpass
Love you will see
It heals every bit
Void to extreme ecstasy 
Exactly, so now breathe


For Acrostic Only


I'm not going to give out my notes to this now, first I'd like to know what you'll assumed this was about and after a week or so I'll edit and give my explanation :) (As in what was in my mind while writing this!)


Love ♥
Sonshu

10 comments:

  1. No one can know your mind but you ... all poems are open to interpretation based on the reader's experiences ... life can get tough, and depression can be bad, sometimes it makes me want to give up, but I don't ... I don't think love cure all, it helps, but it does not cure everything ... still, it good to know that in spite of the doom and gloom our world put us in, if we don't give up we can enjoy life and the love of friends and family ... sometimes that's a good balance .... and living, after all, is all we really know.

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  2. Beautiful post.
    Loved the ending. Its like someone is speaking on humanity's behalf.
    :)

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  3. Loved the punch at the end! Awesome ending.. Or should I say a new beginning? ;)

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  4. I enjoyed your acrostic and how you divided the depression, sorrow, and grief in the first word (staying) and left us with hope in the second word (alive). Nicely written here!

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  5. Shona,

    Read 2 posts now. Tag was enjoyable. And omg, you tagged me. It seems beyond me but I will try a s a p. This one has been done so intelligently. Brilliant, I should say.

    Take care

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  6. dats really sumthin dat vl make my mind do sum thinking tday..may b a new post vl get in maing nw.....

    a vry gud one

    cheers :)

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  7. dats really sumthin dat vl make my mind do sum thinking tday..may b a new post vl get in maing nw.....

    a vry gud one

    cheers :)

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  8. very inspiring acrostic :) ill do your tag on my next post..thanks for tagging me :)

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  9. very inspiring acrostic :) ill do your tag on my next post..thanks for tagging me :)

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  10. Thank you SO much everybody! :)

    heheheh :D

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