Thursday, April 1, 2010

My Sunshine!


I sit on the lush green grass
Staring high up above me,
All i see is a beautiful yellow
A Lovely colour so bright,
I just cant take my eyes off you
 
Your the most prettiest thing Ive seen ever...

Staying up there you are so sweet
Wish you always are there for me,
You always give me a shoulder to cry,
Be like this forever my,
I am so involved since that day.....

As i stare at you
I feel your the best thing that ever happened to me,
Times we had,
Memories we shared
And there you are smiling at me,
Forever and always

Its always been my pleasure,
Being by your side,
It hurts to stay away for a while,
Life is a pastry with you,
And just as lifeless without you.

You smile at me,
It makes my day
And how i love it when,
I hear your voice on the phone
You turn every tear,
Into a smile...

Its an utterly obvious thing,
Missing you hereafter,
Will just make me sad,
Always remain mine...
And you are my sunshine....


 [Pictures: 1- He gave it to me! 2: Deviant Art! :) ]

Sunshine as you all know is a BFF of mine. We both wrote this together. Its actually a pun on the sunshine which refers to both "HIM" and the Real sun wala Sunshine! :) So yeah hope you liked it! 

Lots of Love
♥ ♪*Shona* ♫ ♥

15 comments:

  1. wow! u r as sunny as the "real-wala" sun too! and i didnt realize u were a bong. cool! [u R a bengali, right?]

    sweet poem.
    and hugs!

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  2. Wow!! really awesome poem..

    sonali
    http://bollywoodstylediaries.blogspot.com

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  3. Awww, this lovely! beautifully written. I love the time we had and memories we shared part <3
    Ive written poetry together with a friend too, I'd write one stanza and then she wrote one, good times :)

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  4. This one's really cute and nice.... :)
    And it's really pleasant too!! :)

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  5. its a really sweet post :)

    you must be inlove or something..?

    just a lil criticism..but you made a redundancy in this line:
    Your the most prettiest thing Ive seen ever...

    the superlative of pretty is prettiest,,you don't have to add 'most' because its already redundant..>.<

    i hope you consider that sometime :)

    P.S.
    if you're ain't busy, pls. check out my latest post :D

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  6. Shona,

    Beautifully written encompassing feeling of love.

    Take care

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  7. wow this is really sweet , u r sunshine is spreading light this post simply rocks

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  8. @Rapheal: Aaaawwwieee thanks!!

    P.S: I am not a bengali!! :P

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  9. @Smiley: Aaaaawwwieeeez!! thanksssseeee sooo much!! <3 Good times, yea!

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  10. @Choco: Thanks a ton!! hehehe! :) Pleasant...hmm!

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  11. @Syu: Thanks a ton ayu!

    And um...i shua am welcum to criticism. And will consider that. I agree, i went wrong! thanks!

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  12. Even when I've seen and read and written so many verses describing love, the feelings of each poet makes me think again and again!
    Your's is one such beautiful poem!
    :)

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