Sunday, August 2, 2009

AO: As Good As It Gets


Amazing sometimes life is because
Someone makes it so special

G
reat you wonder my life is
O
h it is such a boon to have each other
O
ver the clouds and the moon
D
ancing you go with that someone

A
s good as it gets you wonder whether it will
S
tay forever as tight as it is

I
n hearts and souls you love each other
T
he tenderness in his eyes, the softness in your talk

G
ently walking together you go
E
veryone is astonished by the beauty and perfectness
T
ime keeps moving but you are with that
S
pecial one forever.....



12 comments:

  1. that was very heartfelt and touching, me likes the way u potray ur feelings and emotions...keep it up lady!!

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  2. lovely poem sweets.. :)

    following you, again..

    Loads of luv,
    Kajal (the pink orchid)

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  3. For one so young you wrote a very good poem about relationships .. and I have to agree with you, and this is coming from one so old.

    Glad to see you here again. Now remove the "Teen Acrostic" badge, and get the one from Acrostic Only. Also your the BWA you won is posted at HERE.

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  4. @Rane: Aaww..thansk Kaj! Im glad ur back to grace my space

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  5. @Amias: Oh thanks a load!

    And yes i will put the acrostic only badge!

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  6. Beautiful acro shonshu... I luv it when ppl end their poems with forever....

    one chumaal suggestion..
    in the 8th sentence... the word 'tight'... seems odd.. not apt.. any other word wud be good.. like 'intense'.. any other word... :-)

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  7. @arun: Aaah..thanks i lvoe to end with forever too! and yeah i see it now..lemme change it!

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